Hi Mofo, thanks very much for the feedback!
That suggestion about the PDA is a good one. I’ll add it to the list. Thank you.
I wrote that line by Wendy specifically to be a little ‘wrong’. You’re quite right, hell or fuck are the usual terms - but she’s meant to be quirky and loud and full of energy, so skipping with convention made sense for her.
Huh, good catch on that Les/Lez thing. I’ll fix it now. Thanks!